Writting expression number 04: Describing

1. Exercise 1

Jonathan and Rebecca have just completed an application for a dating service. Using the information provided, write a short paragraph on a separate sheet of paper that describes them.

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Jonathon

Age: 27

Education: college graduate, B.A.

Profession: engineer

Physical appearance: 6’ 2”, average weight, blue eyes, brown hair, mustache

Hobbies: swimming, chess

Dislikes: sushi, tattoos

Ideal mate: independent, intelligent, fun loving

Perfect date: a candlelit dinner, an outing to the theater, a ride in the park by                                           a horse-drawn wagon

Rebecca

Age: 24

Profession: advertising executive

Education: college graduate, MA.

Physical appearance: 5’ 5”, average weight, green eyes, curly blond hair, dimples

Hobbies: hiking, poker

Dislikes: smoking, cheap wine

Ideal mate: physically active, financially secure, communicative

Perfect date: a night at the symphony, moonlight dinner on a yacht, traveling in a chauffeured limousine

2. Description 01

1) Jonathon

Jonathon is a 27 years old college graduate specifcally a bachelor of arts who works now  as an engineer . He is a 6.2 height with an avergage weight . He has a blue eyes with a brown hair and a mustache . He enjoys swimming and playing chess in his free time .He dislikes eating sushi and also hates tattos . His ideal mate is somone who’s independent, intelligent and fun loving . For him a perfect date always meant  a candlelit dinner,an outing to the theater or  a ride in the park by a horse-drawn wagon.

2) Rebecca

Rebecca is a 24 years old advertising executive who pursue a master degree after completing  her bachelor’s degree. She is 5 foot 5 with an average weight . She has green eyes with curly blond hair and cute dimples . She really enjoys hiking and she loves to play poker . She hates smoking and sbe dislikes cheap wine  her ideal mate is someone who is physicaly active finantiacly secure and communicative, for a perfect date always dreamt of  a night at the symphony, moonlight dinner on a yacht or traveling in a chauffeured limousine

Exercise 2

Look at the picture below and write a paragraph (on a separate sheet of paper) describing it. Remember to include a topic sentence, a sentence that provides an overview, several sentences that provide greater detail, and a final sentence that indicates your opinion of the picture.

3) Describtion

Through the picture , we can learn the importance of teamwork within companies that require ideas and responsibilities,  As a manager, you need to be able to rely on your team to hit deadlines, complete tasks, and meet goals. But building teamwork isn’t always easy – there’s a lot of competition for team members’ attention. where each individual or entity has an important role and the basis on which jobs that are built, besides the picture shows or models the following sequence, we can observer the Hall has a special corridor or a reception desk, which is responsible for directing the majority of arrivals to the company, we can notice that the office desks are all next to each other which refelcts that require work, furthermore, we find that workers are not limited to one category, but are divided into two different which are men and women,Workplace gender diversity helps increase productivity, and creativity, improves performance and staff retention, and, as established, boosts collaboration throughout the business.Successful managers rely heavily on teamwork. Not only is teamwork essential for the smooth running of a business, but it also has many benefits beyond the workplace.

Exercise 3

Read the paragraph below. Several of the sentences can be joined together to improve their logical  connection and to make it more interesting to read. Rewrite the paragraph on a separate sheet of paper, combining some of the sentences to make the passage more interesting to read.

Hot air ballooning can be fun. It is a interesting way to spend a few hours on a weekend. A typical ride last between one and two hours. Plan on another one to two hours for preparation before the flight and pick up time after touch down. Most   ballooning is done in the early morning or a dusk. There is less wind during these   times. Also balloons have better lift in cooler temperatures. Wear comfortable    clothing and flat soled shoes. What one would wear for a walk is appropriate. A    sweater or light jacket may be needed in fall and spring. It is colder at higher altitudes. For every 1000 feet in altitude the temperature is 3.5 degrees cooler than ground temperature. Typical altitudes for a balloon ride is about 3000 feet.  A balloon goes where the wind takes it. A pilot can control the direction of the flight by flying at different altitudes. At different altitudes the wind blows in different directions. A chase crew communicates with the pilot during the flight so they can pick up the passengers an return them to the launching site. Radios are used for this. Don’t worry about becoming air sick, like in an airplane. There is no turbulence. The flight is smooth. One last thing– don’t forget a camera. You can get great panoramic shots.

Rewrite the sentence

Hot air ballooning can be fun, It is an interesting way to spend a few hours on a weekend. A typical ride last between one and two hours So plan on another one to two hours for preparation before the flight and pick up time after touch down, Most   ballooning is done in the early morning or a dusk because There is less wind during these   times Also balloons have better lift in cooler temperatures besides that Wear comfortable    clothing and flat soled shoes.  What one would wear for a walk is appropriate, A    sweater or light jacket may be needed in fall and spring. Since It is colder at higher altitudes. For every 1000 feet in altitude the temperature is 3.5 degrees cooler than ground temperature Typical altitudes for a balloon ride is about 3000 feet  after that A balloon goes where the wind takes it since a pilot can control the direction of the flight by flying at different altitudes furthermore At different altitudes the wind blows in different directions and A chase crew communicates with the pilot during the flight, so they can pick up the passengers a return them to the launching site. Radios are used for this and Don’t worry about becoming air sick, like in an airplane. There is no turbulence. The flight is smooth. One last thing– don’t forget a camera because You can get great panoramic shots.

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